This is the first chapter in a book I’ve been working on and I would love some feedback. I set up a Google document with link in the private post. I’ll send the password after the contact form is filled.
The water was not cold nor warm, like I had expected. It matched my body heat creating the illusion that I hadn’t stepped in. The boy proceeded to baptize me in the pond, pouring water over my head while saying a prayer. He finished the prayer and bowed his head while pushing mine under the water.