Water Demon first chapter teaser.

This is the first chapter in a book I’ve been working on and I would love some feedback. I set up a Google document with link in the private post. I’ll send the password after the contact form is filled.

The water was not cold nor warm, like I had expected. It matched my body heat creating the illusion that I hadn’t stepped in. The boy proceeded to baptize me in the pond, pouring water over my head while saying a prayer. He finished the prayer and bowed his head while pushing mine under the water.

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I love to write. I've always had a strong imagination and my mind never stops creating scenes that I want to share. I am new to writing so feedback is great and comments are appreciated, plus any tips. I live in a small town in Tennessee but for only a year. I lived on Long Island most of my life.

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